explans-50

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1.提供——皮肤再生物质基础 。

1. Provide --the skin renew physical foundation 。

2.破解——创伤后色素沉着之谜 。

2. solve--the mystery of dull skin for wounds。

3.创立——无色素沉着修复医学 。

3.innovate--medical technology of color free facial treatment for skin repair。

4.实现——人类恒久健康肌肤

4. Invent--permanet human healthy skin。

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My interest 【with】in computers began with video games I used to play at a local shopping mall. My parents disliked these games, and perhaps this dislike explains why they refuse to take computers seriously. Personal computers that operate as word processors and do other jobs 【look】looked to them like mechanical games. Same 【do】 as the pocket calculators my friends and I 【use】 used to do math. 。

A word processor I used in my senior year to write papers 【for】in English may explain this suspicion. A word processor is a small computer program 【to work】 that works like a typewriter. The keyboard is similar to a typewriter. The major difference is that in a processor “function keys” do many more jobs. Specifically, the typed words appear on the “monitor” or screen above the keyboard, and since you “edit” these words on the screen, the processor has extra keys that erase words or whole lines or move 【it】 them to other places in the paragraph or essay. 【The other】Another convenience is that corrected pages don’t have to be retyped. The processor has an attached printer and （with a） press （of） a button （it） transfers the text on the screen to “hard copy” – （a）computer jargon for typed copy produced by the printer. 。

Processors thus make the job of writing look easy. One of my teachers objected that a paper I wrote on a processor looked 【as if】like a bank statement; he was objecting to the broken letters that a cheap “dot-matrix” printer like mine 【produces】had produced. He didn’t want to tell me his real objection – that writing a paper should not be easy. He obviously assumed that the processor and printer （had）made the writing easy by doing the work. But the printer doesn’t write the paper, it just reproduces what I 【write】have written with the processor. The real work is in writing the paper and editing the words on the screen. In fact, the ease of making corrections with a processor 【give】gives me greater control over my writing. I didn’t use to 【proofread】proofreading a paper to avoid having to edit a page or retype it. The processor encourages me to look for mistakes.。

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