60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说。
清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。
所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。
60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分。
这样五个层次:
1)开始句
2)向主体过度句
3)主体
叙述
4)向结尾过度
5)结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。
也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。
所以往往是一句话就解决问题。
第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。
第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。
因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。
所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。
在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。
过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。
结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右。
篇一:乡村景色作文
我的家乡在农村。我觉得乡下的风景可不比城里的差。我一走进村口就看见一条平整的水泥路,路口两旁种满了一颗颗绿化树。一阵风吹来,树木在风中随风摇曳。
乡村的风景是那么的迷人。春天到了,潮湿的空气里,飘着小草的清香;田野里,放眼望去都是一片绿油油的菜苗;春风吹来,菜苗随风起舞,就像给大地铺上了一层厚厚的地毯。
我家门前的文旦树开花了,一朵朵雪白的小花在春风里发出淡淡的香气。树上的鸟妈妈也开始筑巢了,没两天功夫,一个又宽敞又漂亮的鸟巢就完成了,给文旦树平添了一道亮丽的风景。
转眼间夏天到了,我家门前的小河里热闹起来了。河面上有一大群的鸭子和白鹅在水中自由自在地游来游去。不远处有好几头大水牛潜在水里,时不时会传来一阵阵“啪啪”的声音,原来是它用大尾巴在赶身上的苍蝇。岸边的树荫下有好几个叔叔在钓鱼。时不时可以钓到一条又肥又大的河鲫鱼呢!到了傍晚,我们把菜桌搬到院子里。在蝉鸣声中,一边吃着美味的饭菜一边聊着天,真是别有一番风味……
一场秋雨过后,果园里焕然一新。要是你一走进果园就会看见许许多多的果子扑入眼帘。一只只比金子还耀眼的桔子在风中摇来摇去,就像一个个调皮的孩子在玩游戏;一只只苹果犹如一个个神龙活虎的娃娃露出了笑脸;梨头害羞地躲在树叶下;石榴也也熟得像一个个小火球似的,连石榴“肚子”里的“孩子”的脸都红润了起来……
乡村的景色是多么的美丽。我爱我的家乡!
篇二:乡村景色60字作文
“咯咯咯……”随着一声公鸡的叫声,一缕阳光洒进了我的房间,随着微风吹来,像是在跟我打招呼。
我起来一看,乡村的早晨可真是太美了!山上的森林郁郁葱葱,村前的河水清澈见底,天空湛蓝深远,空气也清新甜润。
这时,我忽然闻到了一阵清香,我便赶紧跑了出去,一看,原来是河水里面的荷花开了。那亭亭玉立,高雅清香的荷花,可真是令人赞不绝口呀!
荷花已经开了不少了。荷叶挨挨挤挤的,像一个个碧绿的大圆盘。荷花在这些大圆盘里冒出来。荷花的颜色有粉红的,也有乳白的。它们多么像是一个个小娃娃正在跟你热情地打招呼啊,而你也在用微笑来向它们问好。而且到了夜晚的时候,你还会听到青蛙在歌唱。
乡村好玩好看的景色实在是太多了,有山丘上的果园,有清澈的小河,有田里的庄稼,还有路边的花朵和野草,更有许多可爱的鸭子和鸡……光这些,我就已经看的眼花缭乱了。
到了傍晚,辛勤劳动了一天的农民们便纷纷回家了。傍晚的乡村可真是别有一番景色。家家炊烟缭绕,饭香扑鼻。还有些村民坐在石凳,说着一些生活的小事,看上去都非常高兴。
我喜欢这种乡村的这种祥和与安宁,但是我更加喜欢这种和城市风光大不相同的自然气息。
Man’s dearest possession is life. It is given to him but once, and he must live it so as to feel no torturing regrets for wasted years, never know the burning shame of a mean and petty past; so live that, dying, he might say: all my life, all my strength were given to the finest cause in all the world—the fight for the Liberation of Mankind. 。
人生最宝贵的是生命。生命对于人来说只有一次。一个人的生命应该这样度过:当他回首往事时,不因虚度年华而悔恨;也不会因为碌碌无为而羞耻。在临死的时候他能够说:我的整个生命和全部精力都已经献给了世界上最壮丽的事业――为人类的解放事业而斗争!
夏天:
Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for football which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the football results of the little leagues. During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home. I usually go there during the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the city. I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet life of the villagers. 。
夏天是户外运动最好的季节.这是一个橄榄球的季节,橄榄球由于广受欢迎被称为全民运动.我常常看电视,看报纸,从报道中获得小联盟橄榄球赛的比赛结果.夏日里,我喜欢经常去海滩,因为那里离我家不远.在城里的学校呆了几个月后,暑假我常常去那里放松一下.此处有我很熟悉的村民们的宁静生活,这让我倍感舒适. 。
秋天:Autumn
For me the autumn or fall starts in September when school starts its new term. I usually do some shopping. The mild weather made it very nice to study outside under the trees in a small park close to my house. I like to look up the leaves changing colors from green to red and yellow, and then brown colors. The park also has many bright fall flowers; sometimes I see a small squirrel coming down from the tree to hunt for food on the ground. On the weekends, I sometimes like to fly my kite. Usually on the street corners you can see street peddlers selling warm baked sweet potatoes. This is a nice time of the year. 。
我觉得秋天是在9月份新学期开始的时候来临.我常常要去买一些东西.宜人的天气让我感觉在离家不远的小公园的树下学习是件非常惬意的事.我喜欢抬起头看蓍枝头上的树叶由绿变红,变黄,然后再变褐.公园里还有许多鲜艳的秋花.有时我会见到小松鼠从树上跳到地上觅食.在周末,我有时会去放风筝.在街头的拐角处,常常会有街头小贩在卖烤红薯.秋天是一年中的好时节.。
冬天:Winter
Winter is very cold and windy in most parts of China. I usually look forward to the Spring Festival and the winter holiday when I can go to the south where the climate is warmer during these holidays. Also, I look forward to seeing my grandparents and my friends. Winter is the time everyone is in a festive mood. In the city, I usually do a lot of reading at home in the winter because of eh cold weather outside. 。
中国大部分地区的冬天是即冷又有风的。我总是盼望着春节或寒假,到时候我就可以去南方了,当地的气候在这时会暖和的多。我也盼望着去探望我的祖父母和我的朋友。冬天,每个人都怀着喜庆的心情。在城里,冬天的时候我经常待在家里尽情地看书,因为外面的天气非常的冷。
Chinese New Year。
Chinese New Year is the most important festival for Chinese people all over the world. It is also called the Spring Festival or the Lunar New Year. The exact date of the Spring Festival on the Western calendar changes from year to year. However, Chinese New Year takes place between January 1 and February 19. 。
On the Chinese calendar every year has an animal's name. These animals are the rat, ox, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, ram, monkey, rooster, dog and pig. A Chinese legend says that these twelve animals had a race. The first year was named after the rat, the winner. The other eleven years were named according to the order in which the animals arrived in the race. The clever rat jumped onto the ox's back, and then at the end jumped over the ox's head to arrive first! 。
The Chinese believe that a person born in a particular year has some of the characteristics of that animal.。
春 节
对于全世界的华人来说,中国的新年是最重要的节日。人们也称它为春节或农历新年。 公历春节的确切日期每年都在变化。但是春节一般都在 1 月 1 日 到 2 月 18. 日 之间。 在农历中,每年都有一个生肖。这些生肖是鼠、牛、虎、兔、龙、蛇、马、羊、猴、鸡、狗和猪。据传说,这十二个动物举行了一次赛跑,第一年就以获胜者鼠命名,其他十一年就根据动物们到达终点的顺序命名。聪明的鼠跳在牛背上,在最后时刻跳过牛的头顶第一个到达终点!
中国人相信在某一年出生的人具有这一年生肖的一些特征。
The Toad and the Frog。
A toad saw a frog near the road. He was a fat old frog. He sat and moaned and groaned. 。
The toad said, “Do not moan and groan, Mr. Frog. Hop like me. Hop down the road.”
So the frog and the toad went down the road to a big oak tree. 。
“I am home,” said the toad. “Come in and I will make tea.”
But Mr. Frog said, in a deep croak, “I must not roam far from home. I will be off to my home near the pond.”
癞蛤蟆和青蛙
一只癞蛤蟆在路边看到一只青蛙。那是只又胖又老的青蛙。他坐在那里呻吟叹息着。
癞蛤蟆说:“青蛙先生,不要呻吟叹息了。像我一样跳吧。沿着这条路跳。”
所以青蛙和癞蛤蟆一起沿着小路跳到一棵大橡树下。
“我到家了,”癞蛤蟆说,“进来吧,我来泡茶。”
但青蛙用低沉的声音说:“我不能在离家远的地方闲逛,我要回我在池塘边上的家。”
Two Dumplings
A young man had a small business. He worked very hard, and he made a lot of money. One day, he had dinner with a businessman. He wanted the man to become his business partner. When they finished the dinner, there were two dumplings left. 。
The young man told the waitress: "Please pack them in a doggy bag and I'd like to take them home.Soon the businessman decided to work together with the young man. He said, "The young man is great. He has lots of money but he won't waste it。
两个饺子
一个年轻人做了点小生意。他工作很努力,所以他赚到了许多钱。一天,他和一个商人吃饭。他希望那个人成为他的生意伙伴。当他们吃完饭后,还剩下两个饺子。
年轻人告诉服务员小姐:“请把这两个饺子打包,我要带回家去。”很快,这个商人就决定和这个年轻人一起做生意了。他说:“这个年轻人很好。他有很多钱但他不浪费。”
.Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world 。
昨天是我生日,所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。。
I like the Chinese new year better than any other festival. This is a time especially for rest and joy. I need not study. I wear good clothes and eat good food. I have a good time from morning till night. I am as happy as a king. 。
我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时间。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服,吃好东西。我每天从早到晚日子过得轻松愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。
No sooner had the witer vacation begun than I returned to my native town. Of course I 。
must make good use of it;.In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. At night I watched television with my family. hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed. 。
寒假刚一开始,我就回故乡了。自然我须好好利用它。 早晨我复习功课并阅读报纸或杂志。下午我和朋友打球,或去河中钓鱼。晚上我就和家人看看电视。墙上的钟刚敲十下,我就去睡觉了。
I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious! 。
今天我过得非常开心!早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融。
1. My family
There are three people in my family. Of course I am the only child. Both my parents are teachers and they work hard every day. They are kind and friendly so their students all love them very much. My father likes reading and traveling very much. My mother likes cooking and collecting stamps. I am a middle school student. I enjoy my lessons very much. I am good at English and maths. I am interesting in playing table tennis and I am a good player. My parents and Iive in Beijing . We often take a short trip during our vacation. I think I have a happy family. 。
2. My bedroom
I have a small bedroom. There is a bed on the right corner of the room. There is a desk and a chair beside the bed. There is a computer and a lamp on the desk. There is a bookshelf between the bed and the desk. There are thousands of books on the bookshelf. Although my bedroom is small, it's always clean and tidy. So I like my bedroom very much.。
3. My English teacher。
Let me tell you something about my English teacher Ms. Gao. She is slim and beautiful with curly,long hair. She is in her early thirties. She is always full of energy and her lessons are always well-prepared and clearly delivered. All of us like her lessons very much because we can gain much from her lessons. Besides, she is always friendly and kind so she can make friends easily with her sudents outside the classroom. Ms.Gao is truly a wise teacher.。
4.My best friend。
Li Hua is one of my best friends. She is slim and beautiful with a pair of glasses. She is friendly and generous. She is good at English and I am good at maths so we often help each other. Her interests similar to mine, she likes traveling, reading and playing table tennis. She is the most knowledgeable person I have ever known. No matter what you ask, she can always find a perfect answer in her brilliant brain. We often play table tennis on weekend and sometimes we go to movies on Sundays.。
5.My day
I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o'clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games . 。
We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun ! 。
6. How to use internet well。
I think it is not all bad for millde school student to search the Internet.Some students play games on line.I don't agree it at all that It has nothing to do with their study.And it will make them lose the interests of learning.But also it is very nessary for us to search the Internet.In the modern world,using computer and the Internet is an important skill.We can use it to find some information that we need and communicate with our friends,teachers and parents.Sending e-mail and check out some international news are useful for us as well. 。
7.The Way to Keep Healthy。
It's important for us to be healthy all our life. We can't study or work well without healthy body.。
There're many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."。
8. Football
Football is connected with the people throughout the world.。
It has become a part of people's life..Every day, man), football matches are going on here and there around the world.。
Pick up a newspaper and you can learn the the results of the football matches. We enjoy playing football, watching football games after work. During the football matches of the World Cup,millions of people watch the matches on TV.。
When their favorite teams win, they will give them three cheers. When they fail,they feel sad. We all hope our national team will be the strongest one in the world.。
9. Good Neighbours。
We all have neighbours. A good neighbour is better than a distant relative. It is common that we may meet with difficulties.When we have igood neighbours, they will always come to help。
you. Neighbours should get on well with each other.。
My neighbour has a daughter. We are of the same age but we don~t study in the same school. In the evening we always do homework together. She is good at maths and I am good at English. So we often help each other.。
10.My collecting-tin.(存钱罐)
I have a lot of little handiwork, but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.。
It is a little man made of china. He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses. His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face. His big and round body is very funny.。
Because of this collecting-fin, I have learned how to savemoney, When I was a little boy, I always put coins away, then I dropped them into his round bOdy.。
Sometimes he can "eat" plenty of coins at a time, He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.。
祝你学习进步,更上一层楼!愿我们互相帮助,共同进步!请记得采纳,谢谢~O(∩_∩)O~。
熟悉的四季味道
今天,我品味出了四季的味道。
春天的味道是温暖甜蜜的。瞧,燕子急切地想吃甜食了,她不怕困难、不怕寒冷地飞来品尝春公主派发的美味的、温暖的蜜糖呢。树苗娃娃迫不及待地把用春公主发的蜜糖一口吃下,那久久孕育的芽儿一下子就长了出来,满世界都充满了生机盎然的翠绿;冰冻了几个月的湖水,听燕子说春公主正在给大家派发蜜糖,马上露出欣喜的笑容,浑身充满活力地向春公主奔去,想快点吃到那美味的蜜糖。终于见到春公主了,吃了蜜糖的湖水,兴高采烈地开始满世界的旅游,去为农民伯伯灌溉那肥沃的田地。
夏天的味道是炎热的、酸酸的。你看,知了收到了夏王子给的美食,一口吞下,热的他“知了,知了”地到处向人们宣告:夏天来啦!河马吃了夏王子发的美食后,热的他一骨碌跳到水里, 享受那舒适的“温泉浴”。
秋天的味道是凉爽的、甜中带酸的。果树吃了秋仙子给的果糖,凉爽的把久久孕育的果子宝宝一下子生了出来,果农们迎来了又一个丰收的季节。
冬天的味道是冰凉、酸酸的。冬姑娘给了狗熊一大块蜜糖,狗熊吃了一个激灵, 冻的他马上钻进被窝,一个冬天也不见他可爱的身影。
美丽的四季, 充满了不同的的味道,我们的生活和四季一样,有温暖甜蜜、也有酸甜苦辣,就是有了这各种各样的味道,我们的生活才这么美好,每天徜徉在幸福的海洋里。
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